Merge pull request #3737 from raspberrypi/small-typo-fixes

Make minor wording improvements to the Pico documentation
raspberrypi · Jun 18, 2024 · febf884 · febf884
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@@ -15,18 +15,16 @@ Download the correct MicroPython UF2 file for your board:
 
 //IMPORTANT: Until Bluetooth support is integrated into the upstream repo you should download the beta https://datasheets.raspberrypi.com/soft/micropython-firmware-pico-w-130623.uf2[UF2 firmware] which has both Wi-Fi and Bluetooth support built in. Documentation introducing working with Wi-Fi and Bluetooth on Raspberry Pi Pico W with C/{cpp} or MicroPython is presented in the https://datasheets.raspberrypi.com/picow/connecting-to-the-internet-with-pico-w.pdf[Connecting to the Internet with Raspberry Pi Pico W] book. Full details of https://github.com/bluekitchen/btstack#supported-protocols-and-profiles[supported Bluetooth protocols and profiles] are Blue Kitchen https://github.com/bluekitchen/btstack[BTStack] Github repository.
 
-Documentation introducing working with Wi-Fi and Bluetooth on Raspberry Pi Pico W with C/{cpp} or MicroPython is presented in the https://datasheets.raspberrypi.com/picow/connecting-to-the-internet-with-pico-w.pdf[Connecting to the Internet with Raspberry Pi Pico W] book. Full details of https://github.com/bluekitchen/btstack#supported-protocols-and-profiles[supported Bluetooth protocols and profiles] are Blue Kitchen https://github.com/bluekitchen/btstack[BTStack] Github repository.
+To work with Wi-Fi and Bluetooth on Raspberry Pi Pico W with C/{cpp} or MicroPython, see the https://datasheets.raspberrypi.com/picow/connecting-to-the-internet-with-pico-w.pdf[Connecting to the Internet with Raspberry Pi Pico W] book. For details about https://github.com/bluekitchen/btstack#supported-protocols-and-profiles[supported Bluetooth protocols and profiles], see the Blue Kitchen https://github.com/bluekitchen/btstack[BTStack] Github repository.
 
 NOTE: MicroPython distributions for other RP2040-based boards are available on the https://micropython.org/download/[MicroPython download page].
 
-Then go ahead and:
+To program your device, follow these steps:
 
-. Push and hold the BOOTSEL button and plug your Pico into the USB port of your Raspberry Pi or other computer. Release the BOOTSEL button after your Pico is connected.
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-. It will mount as a Mass Storage Device called RPI-RP2.
+. Push and hold the BOOTSEL button while connecting your Pico with a USB cable to a computer. Release the BOOTSEL button once your Pico appears as a Mass Storage Device called RPI-RP2.
 
 . Drag and drop the MicroPython UF2 file onto the RPI-RP2 volume. Your Pico will reboot. You are now running MicroPython.
 
-. You can access the REPL via USB Serial. 
+. Access the REPL via USB Serial.
 
 The https://datasheets.raspberrypi.com/pico/raspberry-pi-pico-python-sdk.pdf[Raspberry Pi Pico Python SDK] book contains step-by-step instructions for connecting to your Pico and programming it in MicroPython using both the command line and the https://thonny.org/[Thonny] IDE.