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 === Visual aids
 
-Visually-impaired users of Raspberry Pi OS can find helpful tools in the Recommend Software menu.
+Users of Raspberry Pi OS who have visual impairments can find helpful tools in the *Recommended Software* menu.
 
-We offer the https://help.gnome.org/users/orca/stable/introduction.html.en[Orca screen reader] to better navigate your way through the Raspberry Pi operating system, along with a screen magnifier to increase the readability of UI and screen elements.
+We offer the https://help.gnome.org/users/orca/stable/introduction.html.en[Orca screen reader] to better navigate the Raspberry Pi operating system, along with a screen magnifier to increase the readability of UI and screen elements.
 
 ==== Orca screen reader
 
 You can install Orca screen reader from the *Recommended Software* section of the main Raspberry Pi menu. Alternatively you can press *Ctrl* + *Alt* + *Space* to automatically install Orca.
 
-When booting Raspberry Pi OS for the first time after installing a new image, an automatic spoken reminder will play after 30 seconds. This reminder will provide instructions on how to install Orca.
+When booting Raspberry Pi OS for the first time after installing a new image, an automatic spoken reminder will play after 30 seconds. This reminder will provide instructions on how to install Orca.