Copy tweaks to announcement email

joemasilotti · Apr 16, 2024 · 0aa8cd3 · 0aa8cd3
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diff --git a/app/views/developer_mailer/product_announcement.html.erb b/app/views/developer_mailer/product_announcement.html.erb
@@ -1,9 +1,8 @@
 <p>Hey <%= @developer.first_name %>,</p>
-<p>Joe here, founder of <%= link_to "RailsDevs", root_url %>, with an exciting product announcement.</p>
-<p>Watch the video announcement <a href="https://x.com/joemasilotti/status/1778832451663802585">on Twitter</a>.</p>
+<p>Joe here, founder of RailsDevs, with an exciting announcement (watch <a href="https://x.com/joemasilotti/status/1778832451663802585">on Twitter</a>).</p>
 <p>Developers can now add up to 5 <i>specialties</i> to their profile. Specialties are a new way to <b>share what you are passionate about with hiring businesses</b>.</p>
 <p>You don't need to be an expert (yet!). Specialties let businesses know what you do best - what sets you apart from other developers.</p>
-<p>Soon businesses will be able to filter profiles by these tags. And developers with specialties will appear at the top of search results.</p>
+<p>Businesses will soon be able to filter profiles by these tags. And developers with specialties will appear at the top of search results.</p>
 <p>So make sure to add <%= link_to "your specialties", notification_url(@notification.record) %> as soon as possible!</p>
 <p>If you need help tweaking your profile or specialties let me know by hitting reply.</p>
 <%= render "shared/signature" %>

diff --git a/app/views/developer_mailer/product_announcement.text.erb b/app/views/developer_mailer/product_announcement.text.erb
@@ -2,14 +2,14 @@ Hey <%= @developer.first_name %>,
 
 Joe here, founder of RailsDevs, with an exciting product announcement.
 
-Watch the video announcement on Twitter:
+Watch on Twitter:
   https://x.com/joemasilotti/status/1778832451663802585
 
 Developers can now add up to 5 specialties to their profile. Specialties are a new way to share what you are passionate about with hiring businesses.
 
 You don't need to be an expert (yet!). Specialties let businesses know what you do best - what sets you apart from other developers.
 
-Soon businesses will be able to filter profiles by these tags. And developers with specialties will appear at the top of search results.
+Businesses will soon be able to filter profiles by these tags. And developers with specialties will appear at the top of search results.
 
 So make sure to add your specialties as soon as possible:
   <%= notification_url(@notification.record) %>