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Xiaomi aquara hub 2 issues accessing api: make note more prominent #35113

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    • Enhanced clarity and readability of the Xiaomi Gateway (Aqara) integration documentation.
    • Added a new note section outlining differences between hub versions (v1 and v2).
    • Standardized formatting for the supported devices and actions sections.
    • Expanded troubleshooting section with detailed guidance on common issues and error messages.

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The changes made in the pull request involve modifications to the documentation for the Xiaomi Gateway (Aqara) integration within Home Assistant. Key updates include reformatting for improved clarity, the addition of a note section comparing hub versions v1 and v2, and enhancements to the troubleshooting section. The supported devices section was standardized, and the actions for the gateway were reformatted for consistency. These adjustments aim to enhance the overall readability and usability of the documentation without altering any exported or public entity declarations.

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source/_integrations/xiaomi_aqara.markdown Reformatted documentation for clarity; added a note on hub version differences; standardized supported devices section; reformatted actions for consistency; expanded troubleshooting section with detailed guidance.

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    User->>Documentation: Access Xiaomi Aqara integration guide
    Documentation->>User: Display reformatted content
    User->>Documentation: Review hub version differences
    Documentation->>User: Provide compatibility info for v1 and v2
    User->>Documentation: Check supported devices
    Documentation->>User: Show standardized devices list
    User->>Documentation: Read troubleshooting section
    Documentation->>User: Offer detailed guidance on common issues
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source/_integrations/xiaomi_aqara.markdown (2)

26-31: Excellent addition of hub version information.

The new note section provides crucial information about the differences between hub versions v1 and v2. This addition will help users understand potential challenges they might face, especially with v2 hubs.

Consider changing "straight forward" to "straightforward" in line 30 for correct spelling:

-- v2 might be less straight forward when it comes to enabling the local API. It might even require you to open up your device in order to do so. Xiaomi has suggested this is in the pipeline. If you have a Hub 2 and are experiencing issues, checkout the [troubleshooting](#troubleshooting) section.
+- v2 might be less straightforward when it comes to enabling the local API. It might even require you to open up your device in order to do so. Xiaomi has suggested this is in the pipeline. If you have a Hub 2 and are experiencing issues, checkout the [troubleshooting](#troubleshooting) section.
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[uncategorized] ~30-~30: The adjective or adverb “straightforward” (= easy, precise) is spelled as one word.
Context: ...ithout any problems. - v2 might be less straight forward when it comes to enabling the local API...

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[style] ~30-~30: Consider a shorter alternative to avoid wordiness.
Context: ...even require you to open up your device in order to do so. Xiaomi has suggested this is in ...

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148-150: Consistent formatting improvement with a minor language suggestion.

The reformatting of the xiaomi_aqara.add_device action's data attributes into a table structure maintains the improved documentation style. This change enhances readability and consistency.

Consider changing "afterwards" to "afterward" in the description to maintain consistency with American English usage:

-Enables the join permission of the Xiaomi Aqara Gateway for 30 seconds. A new device can be added afterwards by pressing the pairing button once.
+Enables the join permission of the Xiaomi Aqara Gateway for 30 seconds. A new device can be added afterward by pressing the pairing button once.
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[uncategorized] ~30-~30: The adjective or adverb “straightforward” (= easy, precise) is spelled as one word.
Context: ...ithout any problems. - v2 might be less straight forward when it comes to enabling the local API...

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[style] ~30-~30: Consider a shorter alternative to avoid wordiness.
Context: ...even require you to open up your device in order to do so. Xiaomi has suggested this is in ...

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[locale-violation] ~146-~146: In American English, ‘afterward’ is the preferred variant. ‘Afterwards’ is more commonly used in British English and other dialects.
Context: ...r 30 seconds. A new device can be added afterwards by pressing the pairing button once. |...

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100-104: Improved formatting for action data attributes.

The reformatting of the xiaomi_aqara.play_ringtone action's data attributes into a table structure significantly enhances readability. This change makes the information more accessible and easier to understand at a glance.


140-142: Consistent improvement in formatting for action data attributes.

The reformatting of the xiaomi_aqara.stop_ringtone action's data attributes into a table structure is consistent with the previous changes. This maintains a uniform style throughout the documentation, improving overall readability.


156-159: Consistent formatting improvement for all actions.

The reformatting of the xiaomi_aqara.remove_device action's data attributes into a table structure completes the uniform styling of all action sections. This change enhances the overall consistency and readability of the documentation.


Line range hint 1-1: Overall documentation quality significantly improved.

The changes made to this file have greatly enhanced the clarity, readability, and informativeness of the Xiaomi Gateway (Aqara) integration documentation. The addition of the note section about hub versions, the consistent reformatting of action data attributes into tables, and the expanded troubleshooting information all contribute to a more user-friendly document. These improvements align well with the PR objectives and will undoubtedly benefit users of the integration.

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[uncategorized] ~30-~30: The adjective or adverb “straightforward” (= easy, precise) is spelled as one word.
Context: ...ithout any problems. - v2 might be less straight forward when it comes to enabling the local API...

(STRAIGHT_FORWARD_COMPOUND)


[style] ~30-~30: Consider a shorter alternative to avoid wordiness.
Context: ...even require you to open up your device in order to do so. Xiaomi has suggested this is in ...

(IN_ORDER_TO_PREMIUM)

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Line range hint 246-246: Minor language suggestion

In American English, "afterward" is preferred over "afterwards". Consider changing:

- A new device can be added afterwards by pressing the pairing button once.
+ A new device can be added afterward by pressing the pairing button once.

This change will maintain consistency with American English usage throughout the documentation.

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[locale-violation] ~146-~146: In American English, ‘afterward’ is the preferred variant. ‘Afterwards’ is more commonly used in British English and other dialects.
Context: ...r 30 seconds. A new device can be added afterwards by pressing the pairing button once. |...

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source/_integrations/xiaomi_aqara.markdown (5)

26-31: Excellent addition of the note section!

The new note clearly differentiates between hub versions v1 and v2, providing crucial information for users. This addition will help users understand potential compatibility issues with v2 hubs and directs them to the troubleshooting section for further assistance.


Line range hint 33-55: Improved formatting of the supported devices list

The supported devices list has been reformatted and alphabetically ordered, which greatly improves readability and makes it easier for users to find specific devices. This change enhances the overall user experience of the documentation.


Line range hint 100-159: Enhanced presentation of action data attributes

The actions section has been significantly improved by using tables to present data attributes. This new format enhances readability and makes it easier for users to understand the required and optional attributes for each action. The consistent use of tables across all actions improves the overall structure of the documentation.

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[locale-violation] ~146-~146: In American English, ‘afterward’ is the preferred variant. ‘Afterwards’ is more commonly used in British English and other dialects.
Context: ...r 30 seconds. A new device can be added afterwards by pressing the pairing button once. |...

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Line range hint 233-268: Comprehensive improvements to the troubleshooting section

The troubleshooting section has been significantly enhanced with more detailed information and new subsections addressing specific issues. These improvements provide users with more comprehensive guidance for resolving common problems, making the documentation more helpful and user-friendly.


Line range hint 1-268: Overall excellent improvements to the documentation

The changes made in this pull request significantly enhance the Xiaomi Gateway (Aqara) integration documentation. The additions and reformatting align perfectly with the PR objectives of improving clarity and making important notes more prominent. Key improvements include:

  1. Addition of a clear note distinguishing between hub versions v1 and v2.
  2. Improved formatting and organization of the supported devices list.
  3. Enhanced presentation of action data attributes using tables.
  4. Expanded troubleshooting section with more comprehensive guidance.

These changes will greatly improve the user experience for those setting up and troubleshooting the Xiaomi Gateway (Aqara) integration in Home Assistant.

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[locale-violation] ~146-~146: In American English, ‘afterward’ is the preferred variant. ‘Afterwards’ is more commonly used in British English and other dialects.
Context: ...r 30 seconds. A new device can be added afterwards by pressing the pairing button once. |...

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