Supplied some tiny corrections and rephrasings.

Author: mjaix

rev_news/drafts/edition-122.md

@@ -13,7 +13,7 @@ Welcome to the 122nd edition of [Git Rev News](https://git.github.io/rev_news/re
 a digest of all things Git. For our goals, the archives, the way we work, and how to contribute or to
 subscribe, see [the Git Rev News page](https://git.github.io/rev_news/rev_news/) on [git.github.io](http://git.github.io).
 
-This edition covers what happened during the months of March 2025 and April 2025.
+This edition covers what happened during the months of March and April 2025.
 
 ## Discussions
 
@@ -42,7 +42,7 @@ This edition covers what happened during the months of March 2025 and April 2025
 
 * [Patch (apply) vs. Pull](https://lore.kernel.org/git/1119284365.3926.15.camel@localhost.localdomain/)
 
-  To celebrate Git's 20th anniversary in our own way, let's talk about
+  To celebrate Git's 20th anniversary in our own way let's talk about
   a discussion on the Git mailing list that happened nearly 20 years
   ago.
 
@@ -64,7 +64,7 @@ This edition covers what happened during the months of March 2025 and April 2025
   based on a common history.
 
   Junio Hamano, who would later become the Git maintainer, then
-  replied to Darrin acknowledging that emailed patches are essentially
+  replied to Darrin acknowledging that emailed patches were essentially
   "out of band" communications. Merges could still work if the same
   patch had been applied independently. Even if that wasn't ideal, it
   was "manageable".
@@ -88,7 +88,7 @@ This edition covers what happened during the months of March 2025 and April 2025
   Daniel suggested integrating functionality similar to StGit into Git
   to help with applying patches and bridging the gap between the
   patch-based workflow and Git's commit-based model in general, even
-  though he thought that commits are "fundamentally resistant to
+  though he thought that commits were "fundamentally resistant to
   cherry-picking".
 
   Catalin over the course of the discussion provided specific details
@@ -204,7 +204,7 @@ __Various__
   by Scott Chacon on Butler's Log (GitButler).
 * [Journey through Git's 20-year history](https://about.gitlab.com/blog/2025/04/14/journey-through-gits-20-year-history/)
   by Patrick Steinhardt on GitLab blog.
-* [GitHub MCP Server is now available in public preview](https://github.blog/changelog/2025-04-04-github-mcp-server-public-preview/)
+* [GitHub MCP Server is now available in public preview](https://github.blog/changelog/2025-04-04-github-mcp-server-public-preview/).
   [Model Context Protocol (MCP)](https://modelcontextprotocol.io/introduction)
   is an AI tool calling standard that give LLMs (Large Language Models)
   a standardized way to call functions, look up data, and interact with the world.
@@ -215,16 +215,17 @@ __Light reading__
 * [Verifying tricky git rebases with git range-diff](https://andrewlock.net/verifiying-tricky-git-rebases-with-range-diffs/)
   by Andrew Lock on his .NET Escapades blog.
 * [Mirroring my git repositories](https://dustri.org/b/mirroring-my-git-repositories.html)
-  using [cgit](https://git.zx2c4.com/cgit/about/) for the interface, and nginx as a web server.
+  using [cgit](https://git.zx2c4.com/cgit/about/) for the interface and nginx as a web server.
   By Julien (jvoisin) Voisin on their7 blog.
 * [Mirroring my Repositories from GitHub to GitLab](https://cleberg.net/blog/git-mirror.html),
-  including both public and private repositories on GitLab Fre tier.
+  including both public and private repositories on GitLab Free tier.
   By Christian Cleberg on his blog.
 * [Documentation as Code with AsciiDoctor, GitLab CI, and GitLab Pages](https://jensknipper.de/blog/gitlab-ci-pages-asciidoc-documentation-as-code/)
   by Jens Knipper on his personal blog.
 * [Afraid to Git](https://dammit.nl/afraid-to-git.html):
-  a rant by Michiel Scholten about why because of misbehaving AI scrapers
-  he is not putting his Gitea instance (his Git server) on the Internet.
+  a rant by Michiel Scholten on his dammIT blog, explaining how misbehaving AI scrapers
+  cause him not to put his Gitea instance (his Git server) on the Internet,
+  and force others - like [Linux' kernel.org](https://git.kernel.org/) - to use tools like [Anubis](https://github.com/TecharoHQ/anubis).
 * [Fedora change aims for 99% package reproducibility](https://lwn.net/Articles/1014979/)
   by Joe Brockmeier on LWN\.net.
 
@@ -238,7 +239,7 @@ __Easy watching__
 __Git tools and sites__
 
 * [Devlands](https://devlands.com/) is the game that creates immersive experience
-  to help learning Git.  Created by Jacob Stopak, the author of [Git-Sim](https://github.com/initialcommit-com/git-sim)
+  to help learning Git.  Created by Jacob Stopak, the author of the [Git-Sim](https://github.com/initialcommit-com/git-sim)
   tool to visualize Git commands directly in your own repo, which was first mentioned
   in [Git Rev News Edition #95](https://git.github.io/rev_news/2023/01/31/edition-95/).
   Described in [I struggled with Git, so I'm making a game to spare others the pain](https://initialcommit.com/blog/im-making-a-git-game)
@@ -249,11 +250,11 @@ __Git tools and sites__
   through rounds of different question-based "mini-games," awarding points
   and declaring a final winner.
 * [dgit](https://manpages.debian.org/testing/dgit/dgit.1.en.html) is a tool that
-  allows you to treat the Debian archive as if it were a git repository.
-  Conversely, it allows Debian to publish the source of its packages as git branches,
+  allows you to treat the Debian archive as if it was a Git repository.
+  Conversely, it allows Debian to publish the source of its packages as Git branches,
   in a format which is directly useable by ordinary people.
     * Note that GitHub's Spokes system that stores multiple distributed copies
-	  of Git repositories was once called DGit.  See [Stretching Spokes](https://github.blog/engineering/infrastructure/stretching-spokes/)
+	  of Git repositories was once called DGit.  See the [Stretching Spokes](https://github.blog/engineering/infrastructure/stretching-spokes/)
 	  article by Michael Haggerty on GitHub Blog mentioned in
 	  [Git Rev News Edition #14](https://git.github.io/rev_news/2016/04/20/edition-14/).
 * [Mega](https://github.com/web3infra-foundation/mega)
@@ -262,13 +263,13 @@ __Git tools and sites__
   It is a monorepo & monolithic codebase management system that supports Git. 
   More information can be found in [Why Google Stores Billions of Lines of Code in a Single Repository](https://cacm.acm.org/magazines/2016/7/204032-why-google-stores-billions-of-lines-of-code-in-a-single-repository/fulltext).
   Written in Rust and TypeScript.
-* [Oshiro's git](https://github.com/lucasoshiro/oshit): VCS written in Haskell
-  that tries to be compatible with git.  This is not safe to use,
-  and is only meant for learning how git works and how hard it is.
+* [Oshit aka Oshiro's git](https://github.com/lucasoshiro/oshit): VCS written in Haskell
+  that tries to be compatible with Git.  This is not safe to use,
+  and is only meant for learning how Git works and how hard it is.
 * [codeowner-filter](https://kertal.github.io/codeowner-filter/) is a simple web tool
   that solves the problem of finding just the files your team owns based
   on the contents of [CODEOWNERS](https://docs.github.com/en/repositories/managing-your-repositorys-settings-and-features/customizing-your-repository/about-code-owners) file.
-  It will generate search filters for VSCode, scope configration for IDEA IDEs, and a list.
+  It will generate search filters for VSCode, scope configuration for IDEA IDEs, and a list.
 * [CodeOwners Filter](https://github.com/akowalska622/codeowners-filter) is a Visual Studio Code extension
   that gives you a visual representation of the CODEOWNERS file
   and helps you generate glob include patterns for any code owner. 
@@ -281,15 +282,15 @@ __Git tools and sites__
 * [reproduce](https://github.com/vltpkg/reproduce) is an open-source tool
   designed to independently verify whether a published npm package
   can be faithfully rebuilt from its declared source.
-  It is described in [Reproducibility vs. Provenance: Trusting the JavaScript Supply Chain](https://blog.vlt.sh/blog/reproducibility)
+  It is described in the [Reproducibility vs. Provenance: Trusting the JavaScript Supply Chain](https://blog.vlt.sh/blog/reproducibility)
   blog post by Darcy Clarke.
 * [Graft](https://graft.rs/) is an open-source transactional storage engine
   designed for efficient data synchronization at the edge.
-  It is described in [Stop syncing everything](https://sqlsync.dev/posts/stop-syncing-everything/)
+  It is described in the [Stop syncing everything](https://sqlsync.dev/posts/stop-syncing-everything/)
   article by Carl Sverre, his [Storing small things in big places](https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=eRsD8uSAi0s1)
-  Vancouver Systems Talk (video on YouTube, 55:04), and
+  Vancouver Systems talk (video on YouTube, 55:04), and his
   [Building a serverless database replica with Carl Sverre](https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=dJurdmhPLH411)
-  High Performance SQLite Talk (video on YouTube, 1:10:19).
+  High Performance SQLite talk (video on YouTube, 1:10:19).
   Written in Rust.