From f1db12b7dd89ac6f4ccc372b42abe1f2df84fda7 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Tessa Lau <tlau@tlau.org>
Date: Mon, 24 Jun 2013 07:27:10 -0700
Subject: [PATCH] First pass over demos page

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 diy/hacks/index.html | 42 +++++++++++++++++++++++-------------------
 1 file changed, 23 insertions(+), 19 deletions(-)

diff --git a/diy/hacks/index.html b/diy/hacks/index.html
index 65cc5cd..9516a79 100644
--- a/diy/hacks/index.html
+++ b/diy/hacks/index.html
@@ -47,8 +47,8 @@ <h1>Hacks and demos</h1>
       </div>
 
       <div class="row-fluid">
-        At Creativa 77, we are always itching to try new technology in various forms. Here you can find of some of the initiatives
-        past or going on at our place.
+        At Creativa 77, we love to try new technology. Here you can find of some of the initiatives
+        going on at our lab.
       </div>
 
       <hr>
@@ -64,36 +64,40 @@ <h4>Web Kinematics Robot Showcase</h4>
           </a>
           </p>
           <p>A Web-based application that performs motion planning requests
-          on the cloud for a PR2 Robot and renders the motion trajectories
-          on the browser. It is an experiment of integrating <a href="http://moveit.ros.org">MoveIt!</a>
+          in the cloud for a PR2 Robot and renders the motion trajectories
+          in the browser. It is an experimental integration of <a href="http://moveit.ros.org">MoveIt!</a>
           and <a href="http://robotwebtools.org">Robot Web Tools</a>.</p>
+
+          <!--
           <p>If we can carve out more time for this project, we would like to turn it
           into a cloud application to allow users and contributors to perform and share
           all sorts of kinematics analysis and motion planning requests with any robot,
           planning scene, planning requests, software and hardware design metrics, etc.</p>
           <p>This project is in a concept demonstration phase and is available
           at the links below.</p>
+          -->
           <p><a href="http://liverobots.creativa77.com.ar">Demo</a> - <a href="https://github.com/creativa77/moveit_web">Code</a></p>
           </div>
 
           <div class="row-fluid">
-          <h4>Key Counter</h4>
-          <p>Using keystrokes and mouse movements as implicit indicators of remote team awareness,
-          shared and displayed in real-time through socket.io.</p>
-          <p>The idea behind this project is to experiment with ways to provide members of a remote
-          team with finer-grained awareness of their work status by utilizing the cues already
-          present in the users' interactions with the system.</p>
-          <p>A prototype of this project has been completed and is pending public deployment</p>
+          <h4>Remote team awareness</h4>
+          <p>Enable members of a remote team to have more awareness of their teammates
+          by unobtrusively monitoring the rhythm of everyone's aggregated
+          keystroke and mouse activity.  Collect and display this information
+          in real-time using socket.io.
+          </p>
+
           <p><a href="https://github.com/creativa77/key-counter">Code</a></p>
           </div>
 
           <div class="row-fluid">
           <h4>Wormhole</h4>
-          <p>Using WebRTC to implement a Video Tunnel application.</p>
-          <p>The aim is to create an application specifically designed to connect two remote sites
-          through a persistent video feed running on a big screen on both ends.</p>
-          <p>This project is in a concept demonstration phase and is being piloted
-          internally at Creativa 77 with Willow Garage.</p>
+          <p>Using WebRTC to implement a Video Tunnel application
+          which links two remote sites via an always-on video
+          feed.</p>
+
+          <p>This project is being piloted internally at Creativa 77 with
+          Willow Garage.</p>
           <p><a href="https://github.com/creativa77/wormhole">Code</a></p>
           </div>
 
@@ -103,8 +107,8 @@ <h4>Wormhole</h4>
           <div class="row-fluid">
           <h4>Maker Lab Live</h4>
           <p>In addition to hacking software, we also love making hardware. We have created
-          a space in our lab for after-hours work on Open Hardware and general electronics and
-          hardware hacking projects. Our goal is to create an space to share our passion
+          a space in our lab for work on Open Hardware and general electronics and
+          hardware hacking projects. Our goal is to create a space to share our passion
           for technology with other enthusiasts and provide the tools, ideas and support to
           help make more awesome things come to life.</p>
           <p><img src="img/prusa.jpg" class="img-polaroid"/></p>
@@ -116,7 +120,7 @@ <h4>Maker Lab Live</h4>
           (inspired by <a href="http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=IWV8irg64oM&feature=youtu.be">Boosted Boards</a>).</p>
           <p>In addition, we're experimenting with the idea of 'broadcasting' our hacking
           sessions live via WebRTC so that people that want to participate but can't come
-          join us in person can at least do it virtually, simply by visiting our Web page.</p>
+          join us in person can at least do it virtually, simply by visiting our web page.</p>
           <p>This project is currently active and takes place after-hours at our office
           at irregular dates.</p>
           <!-- a href="http://add-a-link-when-this-has-a-website/" -->