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src/containers/about/description/index.tsx

@@ -20,7 +20,7 @@ export default function AboutDescription() {
   return (
     <Wrapper className="space-y-10 lg:space-y-20">
       <div className="space-y-4">
-        <p className="uppercase tracking-wide">A Horizon Europe project</p>
+        <p className="uppercase tracking-wide">A Horizon Europe Project</p>
         <h2 className="text-xl font-semibold lg:text-3xl">
           <span className="text-wrap">
             Doing more
@@ -36,12 +36,12 @@ export default function AboutDescription() {
         <div className="space-y-4 leading-8 lg:col-span-6 lg:col-start-8">
           <p>
             more4nature is a Horizon Europe project that started in January 2024, ending in December
-            2027, formed by a consortium of 21 partners and led by IHE Delft.
+            2027, formed by a consortium of 21 partners and led by Uta Wehn from IHE Delft.
           </p>
           <Separator className="my-4 bg-grey-800/20" />
           <p>
             more4nature is structured into work packages that reflect the&nbsp;
-            <span className="font-bold">socio-technical approach</span> of the project.
+            <span className="text-nowrap font-bold">socio-technical approach</span> of the project.
           </p>
           <Dialog>
             <DialogTrigger asChild>
@@ -52,19 +52,24 @@ export default function AboutDescription() {
                 <DialogTitle>Project structure</DialogTitle>
                 <DialogDescription>
                   <p>
-                    WP1 is dedicated to the social aspects of empowering citizens and citizen
+                    WP1 is dedicated to the social dimensions of empowering citizens and citizen
                     science initiatives in collaborative environmental compliance assurance, while
-                    WP2 deals with the technical dimensions of these changes. Both WPs support WP3
-                    which implements 40 cases (in Europe, Latin America, Asia and Africa) on
+                    WP2 deals with the technical aspects of these changes. Both WPs support WP3
+                    which implements 40 cases (in Europe, Latin America, Asia, and Africa) in
                     collaborative environmental compliance assurance for zero pollution,
-                    biodiversity protection and deforestation prevention in Europe and abroad. In
-                    addition, we selected LivingLabs and Fab Labs across Europe. WP4 supports the
-                    creation of impact via the broad communication, dissemination and exploitation
-                    of more4nature results to specific target audiences.
+                    biodiversity protection, and deforestation prevention in Europe and abroad. In
+                    addition, we collaborate with selected LivingLabs and Fab Labs across Europe.
+                    WP4 supports the creation of impact via the broad communication, dissemination,
+                    and exploitation of more4nature results to specific target audiences.
                   </p>
                   <p>
                     To discover more about EU research results,{' '}
-                    <a href="https://cordis.europa.eu/" rel="noopener noreferrer" target="_blank">
+                    <a
+                      href="https://cordis.europa.eu/"
+                      rel="noopener noreferrer"
+                      target="_blank"
+                      className="inline-flex space-x-2"
+                    >
                       <span className="underline">visit CORDIS</span>
                       <HiOutlineExternalLink className="h-[20px] w-[20px] shrink-0" />
                     </a>

src/containers/about/objectives/index.tsx

@@ -12,41 +12,47 @@ import Wrapper from '@/components/ui/wrapper';
 
 const OBJECTIVES = [
   {
-    name: 'Create transformative change in citizens, communities and authorities in monitoring, protecting and improving pollution, biodiversity and deforestation.',
+    name: 'Improve the understanding of the dynamics in transformative changes, especially regarding the changing roles of citizens, communities and authorities in monitoring, protecting and improving the environment.',
     description:
-      'Clean rivers, lakes, oceans, soils and skies are the basic building blocks of healthy ecosystems and communities. In this theme, more4nature explores how citizen science can monitor, promote and enforce current policies to prevent air, water and plastic pollution.',
+      'We are defining an overarching conceptual framework for collaborative environmental compliance assurance building on systemic behavioural models that detect obstacles and opportunities for involvement of civil society actors in compliance promotion, monitoring and enforcement. Action research in 40 cases will explore and test a set of behavioural best practices and technical tools and promote their adoption.',
     imageURL: '/images/objectives/objective-01.webp',
   },
   {
     name: 'Increase trust in citizen-generated data as complementary to official observations and enabling its validation, sharing, and reuse.',
     description:
-      'Thriving wildlife and resilient ecosystems sustain the diversity of life on our planet. In this theme, more4nature explores how citizen science can help by promoting compliance with policies that protect species and ecosystem diversity and monitoring policy effectiveness.',
+      'Thriving wildlife and resilient ecosystems sustain the diversity of life on our planet. In this theme, more4nature explores how citizen science can help promote and monitor compliance with policies that protect species and ecosystem diversity and monitoring policy effectiveness.',
     imageURL: '/images/objectives/objective-02.webp',
   },
   {
-    name: 'Generation of indicators using the European Open Science Cloud (EOSC) as a platform.',
+    name: 'Generate indicators to monitor policy implementation.',
     description:
-      'Deforestation and forest degradation aggravates climate change and the loss of biodiversity. The main driver of deforestation is the expansion of agricultural land, and the EU is responsible for about 20% of deforestation and forest degradation worldwide mainly through imports of agricultural products. In this theme, more4nature explores how citizen generated data can best support deforestation-free imports and the implementation of complementary international agreements by ensuring uptake of relevant citizen generated data in compliance assurance.',
+      'We will include citizen generated data in the methodologies for elaborating policy indicators to monitor environmental compliance assurance. There is a need to examine the indicators and compare them with legal thresholds while determining temporal tendencies and future projections in an integrated way for the benefit of local/regional/nations authorities.',
     imageURL: '/images/objectives/objective-03.webp',
   },
   {
-    name: 'Empower citizens and communities by co-designing actions with local authorities to protect their environment in diverse LivingLabs via guidance, tools and capacity building.',
+    name: 'Empower citizens and communities by co-designing actions with local authorities to protect their environment in diverse LivingLabs via guidance, tools, and capacity building.',
     description:
-      'Deforestation and forest degradation aggravates climate change and the loss of biodiversity. The main driver of deforestation is the expansion of agricultural land, and the EU is responsible for about 20% of deforestation and forest degradation worldwide mainly through imports of agricultural products. In this theme, more4nature explores how citizen generated data can best support deforestation-free imports and the implementation of complementary international agreements by ensuring uptake of relevant citizen generated data in compliance assurance.',
+      'We will go beyond the collection of high-quality data, looking for ways to include citizen generated data in environmental compliance assurance. Recognizing that this could not be sufficient to achieve real impact, other actions will be co-designed between creative and imaginative communities (LivingLabs) and local authorities. This will configure citizen & community-led actions that can be reused by similar communities following the same guidance and tooling.',
     imageURL: '/images/objectives/objective-04.webp',
   },
   {
     name: 'Enable authorities and national agencies to combine authoritative data and citizen science data for monitoring of policy frameworks.',
     description:
-      'Citizen science is becoming accepted for biodiversity (e.g. species occurrence quantification and forest monitoring) and air quality (e.g. by the deployment of low-cost sensors) but a deeper transformation is needed in the way authorities collaborate with citizens to integrate CGD in the monitoring frameworks for Zero pollution, biodiversity protection and deforestation prevention.',
+      'Citizen science is becoming accepted for biodiversity (e.g., species occurrence quantification and forest monitoring) and air quality (e.g., by the deployment of low-cost sensors) but a deeper transformation is needed in the way authorities collaborate with citizens to integrate citizen generated data in the monitoring frameworks for zero pollution, biodiversity protection, and deforestation prevention.',
     imageURL: '/images/objectives/objective-05.webp',
   },
 ];
 
 export default function Objectives() {
   return (
     <>
-      <Wrapper>
+      <Wrapper className="!pt-0">
+        <p className="mb-10 leading-9 md:mb-20 md:text-lg">
+          The main goal of more4nature is to trigger transformative change in conservation efforts
+          regarding zero pollution, biodiversity protection and deforestation prevention by
+          strengthening the role of citizens and communities in environmental compliance assurance.
+          To achieve this, we have 5 key objectives:
+        </p>
         <Media lessThan="lg">
           <ul className="space-y-10 divide-y divide-grey-800/20">
             {OBJECTIVES.map(({ name, description, imageURL }, index) => (
@@ -72,7 +78,7 @@ export default function Objectives() {
             {OBJECTIVES.map(({ name, description, imageURL }) => (
               <div key={name} className="flex h-full w-full flex-1 flex-row-reverse">
                 <AccordionItem key={name} value={name} className="peer w-full px-14 py-10">
-                  <AccordionTrigger>
+                  <AccordionTrigger className="gap-3">
                     <div className="flex items-center space-x-5">
                       <span className="text-lg">{name}</span>
                     </div>

src/containers/about/partners/index.tsx

@@ -25,11 +25,10 @@ export default function Partners() {
         The multidisciplinary more4nature consortium brings together a unique combination of
         collaborations, with scientific experts from the social sciences, data science and
         technology, and natural sciences, most of whom also have substantial experience with
-        hands-on Citizen Science. The consortium combines institutional actors, namely environmental
-        agencies and institutions with Citizen Science initiatives and environmental NGOs practicing
-        Citizen Science and intermediaries as well as a network of Fab Labs and Designers and the
-        private sector. This enables the consortium to implement its ambitious and truly innovative
-        socio-technical approach for large-scale double loop Action Research.
+        hands-on Citizen Science. The consortium also consists of institutional actors,
+        environmental NGOs practicing Citizen Science, as well as a network of Fab Labs and
+        Designers and the private sector. This enables the more4nature consortium to implement its
+        ambitious and truly innovative approach.
       </p>
       <ul className="grid flex-wrap divide-grey-800/30 border-l border-t border-grey-800/30 sm:grid-cols-2 md:grid-cols-3 lg:grid-cols-4">
         {PARTNERS.map(({ name, description, logo, url }) => (

src/containers/home/goals/index.tsx

@@ -22,9 +22,11 @@ export default function Goals() {
             <h2>more4nature aim</h2>
             <p className="text-lg md:text-xl">
               more4nature aims to bring about{' '}
-              <strong className="font-bold">transformative change</strong> in environmental
-              protection by including citizens and communities as key actors in collaborative
-              environmental compliance assurance.
+              <strong className="font-bold">
+                transformative change in environmental protection
+              </strong>{' '}
+              by including citizens and communities as key actors in{' '}
+              <span className="italic">collaborative</span> environmental compliance assurance.
             </p>
             <Dialog>
               <DialogTrigger asChild>
@@ -34,21 +36,23 @@ export default function Goals() {
                 <DialogHeader>
                   <DialogTitle>more4nature aim</DialogTitle>
                   <DialogDescription>
-                    <p>We are facing biodiversity loss, polluted environments and deforestation.</p>
+                    <p>
+                      We are facing biodiversity loss, polluted environments, and deforestation.
+                    </p>
                     <p>
                       Although policies and laws are generally in place to manage environmental
                       resources, environmental compliance assurance is still lacking. More data and
                       information are needed, and we need to improve public awareness and take
                       action to avoid further environmental degradation in terms of pollution of
-                      natural resources, biodiversity loss and deforestation.
+                      natural resources, biodiversity loss, and deforestation.
                     </p>
                     <p>
                       Citizen science initiatives present innovative ways of joint data and
-                      knowledge generation (&quot;Citizen Generated Data&quot;) and can empower
-                      citizens and communities in environmental protection.
+                      knowledge generation and can empower citizens and communities in environmental
+                      protection.
                     </p>
                     <p>
-                      More4nature works on institutionalising citizen science in key aspects of
+                      more4nature works on institutionalizing citizen science in key aspects of
                       environmental compliance assurance, from promotion to monitoring and
                       enforcement.
                     </p>

src/containers/home/mission-strategy/index.tsx

@@ -2,19 +2,19 @@ import Wrapper from '@/components/ui/wrapper';
 
 const MISSION_STRATEGY_STEPS = [
   {
-    name: 'Developing Data Visualization Tools',
+    name: 'Unlocking the Potential of Citizen Science',
     description:
-      'Our purpose is developing tools to validate data from citizens, contributing to its incorporation into environmental governance authorities.',
+      'Citizen Science is an untapped asset for many authorities and governance. We are working to enable Citizen Science Initiatives to influence policy implementation.',
   },
   {
-    name: 'Unlocking the Potential of Citizen Science',
+    name: 'Transforming data into actionable information and knowledge',
     description:
-      'Citizen science is an untapped asset for authorities and governance. We are working to ensure that if informs essential and urgent decisions.',
+      'We are developing tools to validate citizen generated data, compute indicators for monitoring policies and alert about infringement of regulations.',
   },
   {
-    name: 'Bridging Data and Policy Gaps',
+    name: 'Speed up the pace of change',
     description:
-      'We want to ensure that valuable data directly informs essential and urgent decisions at all levels of government, from local to international.',
+      'Via large scale demonstration, we validate a set of behavioural best practices and technical tools and promote their adoption beyond the project.\n',
   },
 ];
 
@@ -25,8 +25,9 @@ export default function MissionStrategy() {
         <div className="col-span-12 space-y-9 lg:col-span-6">
           <h2 className="text-xl font-bold text-grey-800 md:text-2xl">Our mission and strategy</h2>
           <p className="leading-9 md:text-lg">
-            We aim to redefine conservation by placing the power of change into the hands of every
-            citizen and we are achieving it by three main paths:
+            We aim to strengthen collaboration and partnerships between citizen science initiatives
+            and local, regional and even national authorities in charge of environmental compliance
+            assurance and we are achieving it via three main paths:
           </p>
         </div>
       </div>

src/containers/home/thematic-areas/index.tsx

@@ -15,7 +15,6 @@ import {
   AccordionItem,
   AccordionTrigger,
 } from '@/components/ui/accordion';
-import { Separator } from '@/components/ui/separator';
 import Wrapper from '@/components/ui/wrapper';
 
 const IconBackground = ({
@@ -36,7 +35,7 @@ const THEMATIC_AREAS = [
   {
     name: 'Zero Pollution',
     description:
-      'Clean rivers, lakes, oceans, soils and skies are the basic building blocks of healthy ecosystems and communities. In this theme, more4nature explores how citizen science can monitor, promote and enforce current policies to prevent air, water and plastic pollution.',
+      'Clean rivers, lakes, oceans, soils, and skies are the basic building blocks of healthy ecosystems and communities. In this theme, more4nature explores how citizen science can help monitor, promote, and enforce current policies to prevent air, water, and plastic pollution.',
     icon: (
       <IconBackground className="bg-blue-500">
         <ZeroPollutionIcon className="h-[64px] w-[64px] fill-grey-800" />

src/containers/newsletter/index.tsx

@@ -34,17 +34,19 @@ import {
 const ORGANIZATION_TYPES_VALUES = [
   'NGO',
   'Citizen Science Initiative',
-  'Policy and Authorities',
+  'Industry',
   'Research & Academia',
+  'Public sector',
   'other',
 ] as const;
 
 const ORGANIZATION_TYPES = [
   { label: 'NGO', value: ORGANIZATION_TYPES_VALUES[0] },
   { label: 'Citizen Science Initiative', value: ORGANIZATION_TYPES_VALUES[1] },
-  { label: 'Policy and Authorities', value: ORGANIZATION_TYPES_VALUES[2] },
+  { label: 'Industry', value: ORGANIZATION_TYPES_VALUES[2] },
   { label: 'Research & Academia', value: ORGANIZATION_TYPES_VALUES[3] },
-  { label: 'Other', value: ORGANIZATION_TYPES_VALUES[4] },
+  { label: 'Public sector', value: ORGANIZATION_TYPES_VALUES[4] },
+  { label: 'Other', value: ORGANIZATION_TYPES_VALUES[5] },
 ];
 
 export const NewsletterSchema = z.object({
@@ -121,9 +123,7 @@ export default function Newsletter() {
 
   return (
     <div className="container space-y-14 py-10 md:py-16">
-      <h2 className="text-xl font-bold text-grey-800 md:text-2xl">
-        Interested in environmental conservation?
-      </h2>
+      <h2 className="text-xl font-bold text-grey-800 md:text-2xl">Interested in more4nature?</h2>
       <Form {...form}>
         <form
           ref={formRef}

src/containers/privacy-policy/index.tsx

@@ -41,7 +41,7 @@ export default function PrivacyPolicy() {
           <li className="space-y-4 text-lg font-semibold">
             <h4>Data We Collect</h4>
             <p className="text-base font-normal">
-              We collect personal data for specific purposes, such as:
+              We collect personal data for specific purposes, namely:
             </p>
             <ul className="list-disc space-y-4 pl-10 text-base font-normal">
               <li>