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fix: Rewrite some passages in aspects.yarn
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Fixing some typoes and some formatting to make it look better in game.
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PraxTube committed Jul 29, 2024
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Expand Up @@ -7,7 +7,7 @@ Ima: Sweet like a spiced wine, and loyal like a gracious gent.
Ami: It makes me feel a little... burdened, though.
Ima: Oh?
Ima: No Aspect is inherently unwanted.
Ami: Aspect?..
Ami: Aspect?
Ima: What humans call Emotions.
Ima: Every single one has its own purpose...
Ima: ...and risk at the same time.
Expand All @@ -20,14 +20,14 @@ title: Motivation
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Ima: A crucial Aspect for a Supreme Diviner.
Ima: It make the hardest challenges the greatest opportunities...
Ima: It turns the hardest challenges into the greatest opportunities...
Ima: ...unless one starts relying on it more than needed.
Ima: There will be times when it evaporates, like morning dew on a hot day.
Ami: There's no Aspect you won't find a negative downside to, is there?
Ima: Hmm? Do you see them all so unambiguous?
Ami: ...
Ima: Each of all the Aspects can either help or harm you.
Ima: It's in how you make good use of them that gives them any value.
Ima: It's in how you make use of them that gives them any value.

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title: Melancholy
Expand All @@ -38,11 +38,11 @@ Ima: Comforting at times, like a safe haven to heal in...
Ima: ...but sometimes destructive, like an abode of chaos.
Ami: I would've imagined it was but veiled sadness.
Ima: It's more nuanced, my dear.
Ima: It often helps delve in yourself.
Ami: Now really?
Ima: Much like all the Aspects, it must first be balanced.
Ima: It helps you delve into yourself.
Ami: Is that so?
Ima: Much like all the Aspects, it must be balanced.
Ami: ...and not allowed to take the lead?
Ima: Precisely. Filter it, outgrow it, but don't get overshadowed.
Ima: Precisely. Filter it, overcome it, but don't get overshadowed.
Ami: Like a pause in the midst of chaos.
Ima: A pause, but not a stop.

Expand All @@ -59,7 +59,7 @@ Ima: But you're free to choose not to dive into it.
Ami: Wouldn't that mean to ignore it?
Ima: You don't have to act on it, just accept its presence.
Ima: And outgrow it.
Ami: Outgrow?..
Ami: Outgrow?
Ima: Use it wisely.

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Expand All @@ -83,7 +83,7 @@ Ami: What are you to do then?
Ima: To turn the longing for revenge into a hunt for resolution.
Ami: Doesn't sound enticing.
Ima: But it's liberating. Holding onto vengefulness can be a heavy burden.
Ima: So you must outgrow it.
Ima: So you must surpass it.

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title: Elation
Expand All @@ -97,28 +97,28 @@ Ima: Indeed. It's invigorating, and brings a sense of boundless energy.
Ami: I wish it stayed forever.
Ima: It's wonderful, but fleeting, much like our whole life.
Ima: And much like our whole life, transience is where most of its beauty lies.
Ima: Who knows it better than us Awareans?
Ami: Why can't we hold on to it just a little longer?
Ima: Because no Aspect is our final goal. We must embrace them all to later overcome them.
Ima: They're fluid and dynamic. They help us taste life better, and savor every moment, from the sweetest to the most bitter.
Ima: Because no Aspect is our final goal.
Ima: We must embrace them all to later overcome them.
Ima: They're fluid and dynamic.
Ima: Aiding us in savoring every moment, from the sweetest to the most bitter.
Ami: That makes Elation especially worth savoring.
Ima: Indeed.

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title: Pride
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Ima: A manifestation of your inner self, the spark of the Creator deep within your heart...
Ima: A manifestation of your inner self.
Ima: The spark of the Creator deep within your heart...
Ima: ...which He guides you with.
Ima: It shelters your ambition, but nurtures arrogance.
Ima: It shelters your ambition, but nurtures your arrogance.
Ami: Ambition wouldn't be without a bit of arrogance.
Ima: You're right. But it does not have to be so always.
Ami: Oh?
Ima: Ambition leads to Realization of one's talent.
Ima: Ambition leads to realization of one's talent.
Ima: But it can also lead to embracing villainy.
Ima: To fuel it, you can use other Aspects.
Ima: The choice is yours, and so are the results it shall bring you to.
Ami: I cannot wait...

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title: Anticipation
Expand All @@ -144,15 +144,9 @@ title: Envy

Ima: Hmmm...
Ima: A feeling you can relate to the most, I reckon.
Ima: It's lingering in you as we speak, in fact.
Ima: I know it.
Ami: Tsk.
Ami: How can I not? When all those spineless nobles in the capital indulge in leisure, and I'm here...
Ami: ...dealing with my clan's potential collapse.
Ami: What makes them worthier than me to bathe in lavish peace?
Ima: That's your Pride deceiving you, my dear.
Ima: It clouds your vision so you only see it from the viewpoint of this current birth.
Ima: We have all struggled while both rich and poor in our past lives, and will continue to...
Ima: It clouds your vision so you only see it from this current birth.
Ima: We have all struggled, both rich and poor, in our past lives,
Ima: and will continue to...
Ima: ...until we free ourselves of the Samsara.
Ami: How do I do that?
Ima: By overcoming all the Aspects whose mercy you're at now.
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Ima: Forgiveness is a tool most suited for your current circumstances.
Ima: You likely will never have a better opportunity to make full use of it than now.
Ima: And it can bring you to results you couldn't have expected.
Ima: So use it wisely.
Ami: Hmph.
Ima: Use it wisely.

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